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Woodland Wonders |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI 
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While in the forest on a sunny day I sit and watch shadows of the leaves play They dance in the breeze and then twirl away As if in a ballet, As if in a ballet Down over the bank lay a crisp clear creek Listening closely I can hear it speak Ancient waters spill forth all that I seek It is full of mystique, It is full of mystique Forest animals romp wild and free Playing and chasing each other with glee Through the lush foliage and around a tree All happy as can be, All happy as can be The forest sounds are music to my ears I've had a love for them throughout my years They calm my soul and chase away my fears All sadness disappears, All sadness disappears © Poet In Pink 2017 |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pinkaladyhoo, Your lovely and lively description of nature in this piece explains perfectly why it is so healthy for you to immerse yourself in it. There is science to back it up. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absouletly brillant, Poet. Your way with words are captivating. Love your poetry! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Just lovely, has a unique innocence to it, not to mention the rhyming is perfect. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
wonderful, the repetition in last verses create a very special effect, like a melody yann |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
So this is the poem you were telling me about? You paint a very rich image illustrating how the forest has a very calming, surreal sense to it. The ambience is similar to the one I used to imagine when I was a child. That is, a twilight zone of ancient forest bliss. If the reader listens carefully, she or he can feel the essence/soul of the forest. Very nice job, and loving the positive vibes. Thanks for sharing your creation, Alana!  |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thanks for the read Lori Doodle Always look forward to your visits ~ Pinkaladyhoo lol |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much Jerry ~ Your kind compliments make me smile Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much for reading & your kind words Lee Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you muchers dear Yann Always nice to hear from you ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you ever so much Cerulean So happy to hear you enjoyed ~ Appreciate your kind words ~ Alana |
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