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Open Poetry #50

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2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2017-08-06 05:10 AM

Houses,
Trees,
A soft air,
I could be in Brazil,
In Paraty,
A Portuguese voice,
A shell
Who knows of what I think,
O freedom,
My imagination!
I could be with you.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

1 posted 2017-08-06 10:32 AM

Love your style....your thoughts leave a lot to ones imagination. Very cool little poem.

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2017-08-06 11:37 AM

Great! If you're with me, let's grab a beer . . .

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

3 posted 2017-08-07 12:19 PM

I'm with you Yann ~ The imagination is a wonderful thing!! Lovely poem, I enjoyed much Alana

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2017-08-07 05:24 PM

thanks blue serenade, so kind to read
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2017-08-07 05:24 PM

thanks Jerry, have a toast

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2017-08-07 05:25 PM

thanks poet in pink, so lovely to read your words

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

7 posted 2017-08-30 08:58 PM

Imagination is a wonderful gift, yann.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

8 posted 2017-08-30 09:40 PM

Ah . . . so Savoir faire, uh, suave and classy . . . I want to be in your dream, my friend.

But I wouldn't fit And the only "class" I ever had was when I attended school

Ha

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

9 posted 2017-08-30 10:13 PM

thanks ida, we poets share that mystery
yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

10 posted 2017-08-30 10:14 PM

thanks jwesley, this poem means a lot for me

yann

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