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In the Hall Somebody Stood
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In the Hall Somebody Stood |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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I locked the door, hearing its click, Inside The Hovel I felt good; Picked up the phone to call a chick, But in the hall somebody stood. I shook off the effect of fear, And I called the girl like I should; To calm my nerves I had a beer, Still . . . in the hall somebody stood. ©July 31, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Hmmm! If you have ghosts for company, as did I, my friend, you've 10 or 12 more years to go before they move along as they should . . . Beautifully written piece, my friend -- again, I find myself saying . . . one of your best. j. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Aww, Jimmy, two thumbs up for your cool comments, and a hearty thank you also. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
Interesting... very interesting. We never know who could be present outside the physical plane and possibly watching all the things we do! |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
You got it, Cerulean. Never know what's behind that closed door. Thanks for being here and commenting. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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