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Appalachian Dawn
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Appalachian Dawn |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Appalachian Dawn Cool-bright clouds hugging dark hilltops. Luminous spectral fog all as yet painted in condensed moonlight. A loon's cry shatters the silence over bare-bone trees and rocks, 'Deep-Time' sentinels. Quintessential loneliness ... then a perfect sunrise! --- b. e. adams (7/26/2017) |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
From stark isolation which mesmerizes into a beautiful dawning of the day. Excellent ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
A good, calm read. I especially liked the last three lines: quote:It paints a vivid picture in mind. Thank you. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Many thanks to each of you for commenting on this particularly li'l "poetic scribble!" These ancient 'endless' hills of old Appalachia have always been my primary sensei (teacher) and muse (inspiration) .. |
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