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Forbidden Flower |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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A flower refused The scent is a memory Forbidden her heart. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Sad three lines, Lori. You really know how to "grab" someone with whatever style of poetry you write. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I don't know I did the topic justice. Scent is the strongest stimulant to memory so refusing to smell a flower whose scent is connected to a love she cannot bear to think about. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
We always try to think we could have written a certain poem better. You did good on this one, my friend. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Nicely penned Lori Belle ~ The message loud and clear  Alana |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Pink in Boots! I really appreciate the feed back. ~L |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks James!! ~L |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
Scents are the best but they can be the devil sometimes :/ Lovely write! -Trina |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Hey Trina! Long time no see! Yes, scents can be the devil, you got that right. ~L |
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