Open Poetry #50 |
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Bradley Lowery |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity ![]() |
When I heard today That Bradley had lost the fight I had no words to say To make things right He was such a brave little boy And I would willingly take his place He filled his mum & dads life with joy Now they have a huge aching space So many people that young guy touched He fought so hard until his time come And I know he will be missed so much Goodnight, God Bless brave little one "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very, very sorrow to read this wonderful poem about Bradley and his fight. It is bad enough when the old ones give up the fight, but when the very young are stilled, it is exasperatingly sad. You gave him a great epitaph. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thank you Jerry. Life can be so cruel. I don't think I could cope with the loss of my child under those circumstances. I appreciate your comment my friend "Ignorance is the Enemy...." [This message has been edited by effjayel (07-09-2017 06:54 AM).] |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I could not add a single syllable to what Jerry said and say it any better. ~L |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
This really tugs at the heart-strings and brings tears as I read ~ A precious child taken to soon ~ A very touching dedication effjayel ~ Thank you for sharing ![]() |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thank you Lori, that means a lot..Jerry is a true sage x Alana, I can feel the empathy in your heartfelt replies. Thanks for taking the time to both read and reply.... Cheers Jack "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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