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Just A Memory...
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Just A Memory... |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI 
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When you gaze upon a rainbow remember this my friend I'm gazing at it also I'm at the other end When the moonlight dances across your bedroom floor Know I'm thinking of you of this you can be sure When you view the twinkling stars on a warm summers night Know I will see them too and think of you with much delight When you hear the whispers of the wind singing in your ear Recall fond memories of me and know that I am near When the fragrant scent of flowers comes wafting into a room May it stir your senses and remind you of my perfume As you're sitting quietly pondering over the end of day Know that I am with you there just a memory away © Poet In Pink |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand-fine Romanticism ! YOU ... have a lovely 'spirit-heart' [as my 'native' (true) American brothers and sisters would put it] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Magical words and rhyme which capture and give this poem a lasting memory, Alana. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Pinkelywink, This is sweet! The rhymes flow like silk. The poem leaves the reader feeling like you have left much more than just a memory. ~L |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely...james |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
You have such a gift for rhyme, meter and your poems have such a romantic lift to them. And I'll say to someone that I now can remember fondly of: "When you look at the moon on a clear night, think that I too am looking at it. Hold that thought, and it will bring back the good memories." |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much Bruce for your kind words and the lovely compliment ~ I am honored ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you Jerry ~ A poet can't ask for anything more than to be remembered ~ Your kind words gift a smile  Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for your sweet reply Lori Lou ~ Your kind words mean much ~ Pinkelywink  |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for taking the time to read James and for your kind reply Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for your sweet lovely reply JJ You always say the nicest things ~ Alana |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks alana, in that way we are never alone, and beauty is a gift delivered, such a sweet poem yann |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
Alana - When walking through the thick green foliage of a Borneo jungle in noonday heat on a Tuesday, I felt a rare twinge of "pinklishness" prodding my right side and summoning me to return and reply to a wonderful poetic work by Her Highness of Hugz, the Goddess of Muchers, the Princess of Pink. So here I am and kinda glad it was not "Just a memory." Good to hear from the one and only.....Alana. Most enjoyed. Namyh |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you dear Yann for your heartfelt reply ~ Your comments always leave me smiling Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Dear Namyh so happy to hear from you my friend!!! Hope life has been kind to you ~ Thank you for the read and your awesome comment So nice to see you! Huggerz Alana |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely writing, Pink. |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
This is sweet. Enjoyed. -Trina |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
bittersweet reminder of belief of love, which is every where. |
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Cerulean Member Posts 109 |
Alana- Beautifully written. It's very comforting to read. Anyone can read this if they have lost someone close in their life. You have a real talent for this kind of writing, and it's obvious by how many people are praising your writing abiilty. Keep up the good work. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Speaking of dementia, I have had it for a few years, mine is affecting my memory pretty bad. Speaking of memory loss, I have misplaced the other "Quintessence" poems. I'll keep looking for them. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you Marchmadness I appreciate you taking the time to read, and I Thank You for your kind words ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Pleased to meet you Trina Happy to hear you enjoyed ~ Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you for dropping in to read Lee and your words are so true Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Thank you so much Cerulean Your kind words gift me a smile Alana |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Just finding your reply now Jerry....I see you found it!!! I'm off to read Alana |
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