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Open Poetry #50

Tresses of Flame

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

0 posted 2017-06-14 06:10 PM

we were young
her tresses reached to her waist
she wielded them
mercilessly
and I, thus tethered,
under her spell remained -
when at last
unravelled
across my cheek they fell
the flame-tips ignited dreams
I dare not tell...

CG

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI

1 posted 2017-06-14 06:55 PM

Hello CG A sweet write ~ I say Tell!!! Tell!!! I double dog dare you!!! ha ha ~ Enjoyed muchers ~ Alana

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

2 posted 2017-06-14 07:12 PM

CG,
Way to go, nice write! ~L

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

3 posted 2017-06-14 07:13 PM

Thank you for the read and the dare, Alana, but this is a General forum, after all.....lol.

CG

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

4 posted 2017-06-14 07:15 PM

Thank you Lori for the read and the kind reply.

CG

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

5 posted 2017-06-14 08:11 PM

Ahhh . . . A sweet teasing bit of poetry for us to drool over. Heh.Heh I don't blame you for not "tellin'."

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

CastleGuard
Senior Member

since 2003-04-30

Posts 760
Alberta, Canada

6 posted 2017-06-15 11:03 AM

Thanks for stopping by, Jerry and commenting.
Teasing is appeasing....lol.

CG

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