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Sorrow (Repost) |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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Sorrow Fisted fingers swipe the tears Darkness hides the path they make There is no end to twisted cries Lost inside the endless ache Lost inside the endless ache Thrive cliché’s intent to heal As if to ease rage that builds Anger feeds the need to feel Anger feeds the need to feel Breaking down to break apart Frame the wound, rage serves to fill Endless pain from broken hearts Endless pain from broken hearts Bridging those whose sorrow knows Time will ease, but never mend Open wounds where tears are stowed - Alison |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Provocative portrait in pain Ali. You captured sorrow in enhancing hues. ~L |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello Alison  Sad but beautifully expressed ~ It tugs at the heart ~ Thank you for sharing ~ Alana |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, Lori and Alana. It's good to be back with you all. Alison |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
...thought I had replied already - as usual your heart and depth show, my friend. And this one is so poignant . . . much enjoyed, j. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, jimmy ~ my friend. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
'tis most fine to have you back ! |
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novemberblue Junior Member Posts 11 Dirty South |
You've rendered grief beautifully here and the pain is palpable. Love the repeating lines. I was here years ago and you were one of my favorites. Glad to see you are still posting! Heather |
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EvaRoss Junior Member Posts 22 |
hard hitting and effective, this resonates to anyone who has felt the sorrow as well |
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