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When I looked at you
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When I looked at you |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA 
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This is the first time that I am smiling, Knowing that when I look at you, I know my reason for being, I have come to live with you, And have been given the blessings from high up above, I have searched from the ground to the heavens, Only to realize that God has been unable to make someone like you, I know my talks are full of charms, and may seem a bit insincere, I will write in the sky, so the whole world can know my love for you, And all the compliments of the world I bring at your doorstep, Ever since meeting you, I live in a world full of love, Every day I thank God and count my blessings for meeting you, I may seem naïve to you, but my heart has become lost, When I look at you, I see my world, So say that you will become my world and be with me all of eternity. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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Boomer Styles Member
since 2014-03-02
Posts 194South Side Of Success |
I think the intended will like hearing this. One ladle serves the soup that feeds the mouths of the many. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...obviously when you looked you didn't want to look away...james |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
My kind of poetry. Nothing like a happy ending, or beginning. Either way your poem made me glad. |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Such a romantic poem. And the best that you can woo your love are the words"join my world" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
loved this rendering of the heart  Love is the life of the soul... |
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