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augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

0 posted 2020-10-18 06:23 PM

Can't Wait to Touch You~

Skin feels so pleasantly cool,
Oh..how I love the sight of you,
so full and proud before me,
patiently awaiting my hands
to trace your lines,
you know I'll put a smile
upon your face,
I'm good at that,
magic fingers, wicked with talent,
I know what you need..
I'll empty you with care..completely,
make you glow enough
to shame the moon,
you'll burn long into the night...
the most handsome
jack-o-lantern
on the block.

©Augustsky

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2020-10-18 08:49 PM

Sky...At first i started to blush, then the ending made me smile. Enjoyed very much.
Thanks for the blush and smile...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

2 posted 2020-10-19 07:53 PM

LOL Poet Paul..Just what I was going for,
had to be a little playful for Halloween.

Thanks..

Sky~

~Tell me the story about how the sun
loved the moon so much..he died every
night to let her breathe~

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

3 posted 2020-10-22 09:34 PM

What a great write!
Love how you carved this one.

Michael

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

4 posted 2020-10-23 03:32 PM

Well, this certainly brought me a smile this morning. The power of allusion at it's best. Wish I could feel the festive nature of fall and Halloween in the air here but for some reason, we are still in the 90's here. Just feels yuk.

Much enjoyed.

Michael

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

5 posted 2020-10-28 09:08 AM

Sky, you little imp! Great write! you had me going! ~L

Forlorn Angel
Member
Posts 143

6 posted 2020-10-29 02:29 PM

Caught me by surprise! Loved it!

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

7 posted 2020-11-08 10:23 PM

LOVE IT!!
j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

8 posted 2020-11-19 05:28 PM

enjoyed this original poem, finely

yann

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

9 posted 2020-11-25 12:32 PM

I was about to dismiss this and then I got to the end. Love it!

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