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I Inhaled, You Exhaled . . . YESSSS
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I Inhaled, You Exhaled . . . YESSSS |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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How we connected is so beyond belief. Our Yin and Yang is poised as the moon speaks of the tides. We thrived on the other as dusk waited for the dawn. We gave our love and it thrived within us. Passions bloomed with each passing hour. Ours were the greatest joy from your heartbeat to mine Distance kept us apart but we walked as though one. We were like Jupiter's rings separated but whole. I breathed in; you exhaled that's how it was for us. ©March 28, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
A truly remarkable poem Mr. Bolton that articulated it's way into my own experience. Case in point: quote:Brilliantly relevant! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
very romantic! To be so in sync is really something quite special. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, PU, am very happy some of my poem rubbed off on you. That's always a good thing. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes Lori, couldn't agree with you more. Appreciate your thoughts. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was a beautiful write...enjoyed, thank you |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I so appreciate on your take on my poem, Lee, very much. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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