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augustsky
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0 posted 2020-09-09 07:11 PM




Autumn~  (dbl.ended Acrostic)


Audacious Autumn, yet muted in sepiA
Upend the fallen leaf,Septembers bandeaU
Time for my bonfire of regret, stained burn'T
Umber sins in flying ash, hurried red impromtU
Mistakes rising silent, leaves dodgy momentuM
Negotiates Winters impatience, but fall does reigN

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Michael
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1 posted 2020-09-09 10:32 PM


I know it takes leaves dying to paint such a wonderful picture as Autumn does, but this poem breathes the liveliness the season always brings us.  Winter can be cold...and even dreadful, but Autumn is a magical time... the cool mornings creeping hazily deeper and deeper into our hot days.  The first wet clouds accumulating in the sky...the wind's promise of future storms.  Definitely my favorite season.


And just wow...at the double acrostic.  Those are seriously hard.

Michael

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2 posted 2020-09-09 11:23 PM


Wow this is so cool. And just in the time for the season. Fall is my  favorite  time of year however I never  could put nature to pen very well! Loved it!


augustsky
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Posts 828
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3 posted 2020-09-13 08:55 PM


Yes, it truly is magical, & invigorating
to me.
Thank you Michael,
Acrostics are challenging, & I like that
about them.

Sky~

~ Cherish Everything ~

augustsky
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4 posted 2020-09-13 08:56 PM


Thank you Forlorn angel, my fav. too.


Sky~

~ Cherish Everything ~

Starmcneil 1955
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5 posted 2020-09-19 03:09 PM


absolutely love this...it rings and fills my soul with joy
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