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Open Poetry #50

In My Part of Town

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-04-20 01:32 AM

In My Part of Town

Her kiss is nice
Her kiss is delicious
and I'd wash all her dirty dishes
if she would keep planting those kisses
upon my appreciative lips.

Her lips that come to share with me
Her lips that I love to see
No...I'm not the richest man around,
more handsome men can easily be found
yet when she comes to my part of town
I feel lucky and rich
when she brings her kiss.

JamesLee
4/20/17

P.U Stinkenbaum
Member
Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans

1 posted 2017-04-20 03:57 AM

Great little tale, melodic in it's way. When a kiss is 'the kiss', it's seldom forgotten.

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2017-04-20 06:02 AM

lovely read.....

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2017-04-20 09:12 AM

Gotta love this one, James, and I do. Nice write.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2017-05-12 08:22 PM

thank you Stinkenbaum, LeeJ and JerryPat for reading and responding...james

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