Open Poetry #50 |
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Karma Called Today ... |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity ![]() |
I believe I'm right where I'm supposed to be Dealing with what Fate gave to me As I look back at my past Life And the Chaos and Carnage left in my wake All of which came with a heavy cost A Daughter, Son and Wife were lost Yes, I am the author and I own the copyright to all of my mistakes |
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Paul Wilson![]() ![]()
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
John...Touching write. If this is true my heart goes out to you...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
All true Paul and thank you for your kind words. Stay safe my friend |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
If poetry was weighted on a power vs number of words scale...this would be the hands down winner out of everything I've ever read. I'm torn between lauding and aching. Very well written expression here. Michael |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
It takes courage to realize and admit such things. I have felt my own attack of karma. It isn't pleasant. "How much is real? So much to question |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
WOW!!! your loss is a clear vision for us to see in your words...I too believe that I am where I am suppose to be...I would not change my past no matter the pain for it have shaped me...thank you for this wonderful read |
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