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effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2020-04-17 04:00 PM





I'm reading a lot about frustration
From people forced into isolation
About how much they miss the hugs
And the touch of those they love

How they never got to say their goodbyes
Or a final kiss from those who've died
When the grief wells up inside
As the tears fall from their eyes

And they realise the tragedy
Of those who died alone
Because  they didn't have the empathy
To  simply pick up the phone

Are you going to be another one
Who waited until they had gone?
If you dont get in touch before it's too late
It would be such a shame

As you self recriminate
Do you really  have to question why
When you only have yourself to blame
Because you weren't there for them
When the time came to say goodbye. ...

Effjayel  12 04 20

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2020-04-18 09:02 PM


Beautiful piece my friend, for a perfect world.
A little harsh for those, who for reasons of their own, can't meet the standards being set.

No offense mean by my comments - just lived and known observations.

j.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2020-04-24 05:54 AM


Point taken. It kills so random and so swiftly. My perspective is more like getting in touch with people before I die, not them.I believe it will be a miracle if I survive this pandemic. ~L

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