Open Poetry #50 |
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The Clear Silence |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665![]() |
Ice blue skies high above, Solitary clouds meander. Whistling wings of grey doves, time now to remember. People gone as spring arrives, death across the world. The virus, still here, survives, we are cocooned and curled. Hum of big bumble bees, flying to blossoms and flowers. Soft new green on the trees, cleaner fresh air now ours. Hid away in houses silent, watching the seasons go by. Friends are now absent, we ask what next? or why? |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Even through the beautiful Spring imagery this carried sadness. I have a trip planned at the end of next year. I certainly hope the world is a little safer then. At least some creativity has come from the world practically shutting down. There were ghost towns everywhere.
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
however there is some hope, yann |
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Starmcneil 1955 Member Posts 174 Alberta, Canada |
I see and hear the beauty and feel the sadness...your words speak clearly |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Goldenrose, Yes..This took me along as I nodded in reflection, the last stanza very moving to me. Well written Poet.. Sky~ Sometimes..Miracles are just good people |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
It's hard for me to relate to the uncomfortable feeling people draw from being locked down, having been on self-lockdown for much of my life. I imagine it must be similar to the unease I have every time I reach for the doorknob to go outside. Would love to say "welcome to my world" but I know this is no joking matter...people (most people) need people, and social interaction and I see how the world struggles without it. Just one sad note in a long line of many that have become visible with this virus. I hope Summer is being more kind to you than Spring was my firend. Michael |
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Forlorn Angel Member Posts 143 |
What's next is the big question! The why is obvious! Someone didn't wash their hands and half of China got the multi strained FLU! I really liked reading this, as this crisis has come with an opportunity of poetry in motion. Writing about these things as they are happening is a GREAT way to make history! See you around! |
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