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Listening For A Glimpse Of You
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Listening For A Glimpse Of You |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Listening with my eyes to the sounds of sight Such wonders to behold that are not yet heard Feeling the soft grass against my back as I await the breezes that carry you ever closer to my arms The wind then rushes through your raven hair like a thousand fingers, your smile like a million suns It’s now later in the evening and the sea swells have subsided Rolling easy, they calm my heart as this day falls below the horizon ...and you glow against the copper sky I love you baby Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"It’s now later in the evening and the sea swells have subsided Rolling easy, they calm my heart as this day falls below the horizon" Oh yeah. For sure that is the way it absolutely is! ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
sounds like a romantic evening on the beach to me! Wonderful how words can take us places we'd like to go. ~L |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you Mr. Bolton! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
" Wonderful how words can take us places we'd like to go"...Exactly! Thanks Lori Rhoden! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
wonderfully romantic...james |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you James! Just out looking for the real me... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
it is so good, passions have to be calmed, these are well crafted words and images yann |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Thank you yann! You're very kind. Just out looking for the real me... |
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Poet In Pink Senior Member Posts 1066 MI |
Hello Stinkie  First off let me say I love the title, it is what drew me in. Once I started reading I swear I was about ready to swoon  Truly a tender and romantic write ~ Much enjoyed...Pinkie |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Aww! Pinky, you always say the nicest things. I really like this side of you!  Hey you Pinky! Help me carry this will ya? It's too heavy for just one! Just out looking for the real me... |
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