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Namyh
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0 posted 2020-01-01 11:39 AM


IMPACT!

From a depth deep chilled by the darkness
came a dread rock hurtling thru the night.
It was seven miles wide and Everest high
and it wobbled with a turn to the right.

Then it twisted like a hulu skirt, tumbling thru the universe,
speeding meteoric like the comets only dare,
racing thru the cosmos, mega-tons coming close.
Life on the Earth unattentive, unaware.

Its weight shifted massive with a movement
from the pull of our gravitating Sun
that pulsed a convulsion which added more propulsion
to this asteroid ablaze and on the run.

Then it smashed winds of Neptune, crushed rings of Saturn too,
bounced off of Jupiter to clear the face of Mars,
pierced thru its red dust, Moon looming up just.
People on the Earth eating, loving, driving cars.

I saw it flash my window ‘cross the night’s sky,
blazing closer, burning larger like my fear
and I knew Man was braking to a standstill
‘cause the clicking of the seconds I could hear.

Then it ticked close of Mankind blasting off the face of Time,
tumbling with his wonders thru a Space of endless black
where Fate will claim his special brand of fashioned life by cosmic hand
and footprints he once stepped in sand will echo no more impact.

Namyh

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ethome
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1 posted 2020-01-01 12:41 PM


Well, this certainly has an IMPACT on the reader!
An intuitive plenitude of metaphoric delight!

I don't suppose it will help much if I
sleep with my crash helmet on......LOL!

I'm just a songwriter and lyricist which is what I love the best but you are indeed a fine poet!

Regards

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2020-01-01 05:03 PM


Namyh...Enjoyed very much, especially the ending if I read it right that the hand of God saved us from this disaster. Thanks so much for posting. Maybe we better watch more closely what is coming our way...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Namyh
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3 posted 2020-01-02 04:23 PM


Eric - If I can sleep under my Star Trek blanket, the blue one, laying on my Star Wars pillow, the red one, you can indeed sleep peacefully with your crash helmet. May the Force be with you.....and thanks for landin' here for a spell to enjoy and deem this a "metaphoric delight". Now that's an impact for ya! Namyh

[This message has been edited by Namyh (01-03-2020 03:02 AM).]

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