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Gunslinger
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since 1999-10-09
Posts 901
TX, USA

0 posted 2019-11-05 02:08 PM


In this world we deal with nightmares-
Even when we are awake-
Caution is the watchword-
We live by… no mistake.

But somehow in the gloaming-
I make a sweet escape-
Into another’s Dreamworld-
From which I hope I do not awake.

It’s a place of sweet caresses-
Gentle words, and lines of rhyme…
It brings to mind a song of long ago-
“Gentle on my mind.”

For that you are, milady-
A princess of my dreams-
But alas the world awaits me-
As I waken to its schemes.

So read and I will listen-
Call and I will come…
Where the dew of morning glistens-
And a sweet love calls me home.



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OwlSA
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa
1 posted 2019-11-05 02:50 PM


Oh John, this is beyond beautiful . . . an exquisite response to my poems, 'Storytime' and another response to 'Our Dreamworld'.  I love it, and may we never wake from the dreams we share.  I will read to you as much as you want me to and call you whenever we are separated for a short while and delight in your return and always welcome you with love to our wonderful home of dreams.
augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
2 posted 2019-11-05 02:52 PM


Beautiful Poem, & I Love that song "Gentle
on my mind" a classic indeed.

Autumn..
The Golden Hush
Before Winter~

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