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Open Poetry #50

Waiting on the Red

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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0 posted 2019-10-25 05:14 PM

An autumn wind blows
A big front yard maple tree
Waiting on the red

LGR(C)10/25/19

Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04

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Texas, USA

1 posted 2019-10-26 01:21 AM

Nice Autumn haiku. Very much a picture, a single moment, as a haiku should be.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2019-10-26 05:40 AM

I like Haiku. For me,they are the whiskey shots of poetry. Or sometimes jell-o shots.
~L

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

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3 posted 2019-10-26 01:24 PM

Your poetry shots are beautiful, Lori. I saw the title and immediately thought roulette...found this much more settling.

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10

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4 posted 2019-10-26 04:36 PM

Thanks Michael,
For whatever reason, I'm glad the title invited you in! ~L

augustsky
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Posts 828
midwest US

5 posted 2019-10-27 08:03 PM

I'm a Haiku lover myself, & this was picture-
perfect. I don't have any big beautiful red maples in my yard (maybe the next) but my
neighbor across the St. does..his is in full
red wonder!
Enjoyed yours L.& your 'shots' brought a Smile

Autumn..
The Golden Hush
Before Winter~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

6 posted 2019-10-30 09:14 AM

Thanks Sky,
I don't know what is taking our tree so long to turn. When it does I bring leaves inside to decorate. ~L

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