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My Own Brave New World
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My Own Brave New World |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
My own brave new world, a place where no one else knows my heart or its' ways My own piece of ground that I can till, cultivate and sustain myself for all my days My own peace of mind, not encumbered by the ways of others; their shortcomings, or their impositions of my time My own thoughts, flailing free without the cares or struggle, no emotions to juggle between the laugh lines and the tears A place where no one knows my heart, or it's ways Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ah, we all, to one extent or another hide our innermost parts of ourselves from the world at large. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
A brave new world, perhaps for one with a sturdy soul...but somewhere where no one knows my heart or its ways sounds like a lonely place to me. ~L |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Yes, that's right Mr. Bolton. Thanks so much for your comment. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
Hi Lori Rhoden and thanks for your reply. You're also quite right. It is a "lonely place to be". I seldom write about myself and instead tend to see various characters in my mind much as a novelist might. Then I write about them in my 'poetry'. So if you gave a thought to it, this is not me in the poem. I'm merely a "Board Ghost".  Thanks again. Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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Night_Owl Junior Member Posts 22 |
Love this.... "My own thoughts, flailing free without the cares or struggle, no emotions to juggle between the laugh lines and the tears" |
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