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Open Poetry #50

a beautiful day

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2019-08-29 08:34 PM

Never say : « it is a beautiful day”
Go and see your mother at White hospital,
Send some flowers to a lonely grandma,
Or Listen the weeping tears of a poet

Never say “ It is a beautiful day”
Give little money to a begging woman
Turn your cell phone off some hours,
Think of the Brazil consuming with flames.

If you do a good action or something more
If you offer some tears to an unknown girl
If you let some sun shining for beggars,
Then you will say “it is a good day”

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

1 posted 2019-08-31 03:42 AM

So true Yann, your Poem is right on target.

Enjoyed the read..
Sky~

A Poem Begins as a
Lump in the Throat,
A Sense of Wrong,
A Home-Sickness,
A Love-Sickness.

~Robert Frost

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

2 posted 2019-08-31 09:48 PM

I think it's a good day because of this poem, yann. We sorely need more kindness and thoughtfulness in this world.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

3 posted 2019-09-01 04:30 PM

thanks Sky, right on the target makes proud

yann

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

4 posted 2019-09-01 04:31 PM

thanks Ida, we can be happy more simply that with money and cars, i appreciate what you say
yann

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

5 posted 2019-09-03 08:46 PM

Beautiful day is by giving and kindness. Wonderful way to start my day, Yann! With hope i start another day.

2islander2
Member Ascendant

since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

6 posted 2019-10-04 05:15 PM

thanks prasaj, comments are great
yann

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