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The Best Version of Me
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The Best Version of Me |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
The Best Version of Me Black night the only eyes that see can set me alight lay your gaze down on me I will be whatever you wish the best version of me the one that you kiss I've no aspirations beyond your view only one destination to be with you Blue world this lonely orbit found me stuck upon you girl lay your hands down on me I will be here for you to mold the best version of me the one that you hold I’ve no reservations this time it’s true only one expectation to be with you Fingertips feel this out my heart swept clean of doubt oh I feel oh I feel so light I never knew nothing so right this is who I wanted to be the absolute best version of me it’s coming through baby you’re already the very best version of you Black night the only eyes that see can set me alight lay your gaze down on me I will be whatever you wish the best version of me the one that you kiss I've no aspirations beyond your view only one destination I've no reservations this time it’s true only one expectation to be with you oh I want to be with you “Outside of a dog a book is man's best friend. Inside of a dog, it's too dark to read”—Groucho Marx |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Deep sigh...oh, that was good...real good. If I had that poem written for me I know the impact would have been profound. Alas,I am left to pretend. ~L |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
In my minds eye, the best version of you has been uncanny, you come across as a deep thinker, clear and concise, and the way you wear your heart on your sleeve is refreshing. I wish you well soul drifter, I’ve always loved reading you in blue. Peace |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Souls, Your poetic-lyrics are LIT!.. (think that's the latest version of 'Cool') lol Enjoyed the read, Sky ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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