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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa 
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29 June 2001 Leaf flutters swirling colours to the soft, forest floor. Wind turns it momentarily to face the stalk from which it broke, then gently scurries it to the crispy carpet of leafy brothers amongst which it commences browning in melancholy relief. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
What a lovely vignette you've painted! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you for your lovely reply, Karilea. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Far as I'm concerned, you just can't beat a good tree and leaf scenario. This is no exception! Thank you! ~L |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you very much, Lori. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your words always make the very most of whatever subject you choose, Diana. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Your words always make the very most of whatever subject you choose, Diana. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
What a lovely thing to say, Ida! Thank you! |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Owl...Softly written. This painted a vivid picture in my mind...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Paul, for your lovely and touching reply. I am glad you could picture it so well. |
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