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augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

0 posted 2019-03-27 04:11 PM

Cover Me With Stars~

Cover me with stars..
let me curl within moon's glow,
make me feel I've found home
in your arms.

Cover me with stars..
illuminate my sleep
in diamond dialogue,
dreamy gold dust thoughts
shared & kept in a midnight jar,
a delicious tremble to heart.

So chilled..
cover me
with stars.

©Augustsky
3-27-19

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

1 posted 2019-03-27 04:27 PM

This is beautiful, AugustSky.

soul drifter
Senior Member

since 2004-09-08

Posts 711
Colorado

2 posted 2019-03-28 11:52 AM

BEE-YOO-TII-FULL!

Seriously lovely, exceptional writing. I seem to always feel that way with your work.

Keeping.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

3 posted 2019-03-28 10:41 PM

This just shines with an uncanny warmth. The feelings are all encompassing. Pretty poetry sky gal.

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

4 posted 2019-04-02 12:42 PM

Thanks Owl for the fine reply.

Thank you Souls for your kind praise,

I did a re-write of this, added another
stanza, but found out you can't edit here after a 24 hr. period.

Thanks Blues, you are a great supporter to
others work.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Namyh
Senior Member

since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

5 posted 2019-04-02 08:43 PM

Sky - I liked this. It so reminded me of the famous Sky goddess Nut, depicted in an ancient Egyptian temple covered with the stars of Heaven and bending over the Earth to swallow the Sun each night and gives birth to it the next morning. Thanks Sky for letting me rant a little. Enjoyed your work. Namyh

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2019-04-03 12:22 PM

lovely, warm and enveloping....

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

7 posted 2019-04-06 06:10 PM

Namyh, Thank you for the intriguing & interesting reply. I'll have to research
that a bit.

Glad you liked Poet..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US

8 posted 2019-04-06 06:11 PM

LEEJ, Thanks for reading, pleased you liked.

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2019-04-09 11:31 PM

Every single sentence/emotion radiates
and resonates within this heart of mine.

Exquisite poetry, lady sky. Bump

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

10 posted 2019-04-10 06:28 PM

august sky...Very tender write. Enjoyed. By the way if you ask one of the special moderators they can sprinkle magic dust here and there and take care of your edit...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

11 posted 2019-04-13 07:21 AM

Sky~
This is wonderfully way cool in a cosmic kind of way! I enjoyed this very much. It was "heavenly" ~L

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