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I Dreamed of Spring
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I Dreamed of Spring |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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I Dreamed of Spring When did the colors fade to white And warmth long forgotten Perhaps beneath Life is moving on... |
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Essorant Member Elite
since 2002-08-10
Posts 4769Regina, Saskatchewan; Canada |
Nice to see you. I like the thought of life always moving on (to Spring) despite whatever winter it is in. Reminds me of some lines from a sonnet I wrote ("Summer in Winter"): Now for the nonce she hides her rosy breast And takes sweet Dream alone to be her lover. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write so nice in so few words. Love your closing thoughts. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Juju, So good to read you again. I love this Haikuish kind of piece. Enjoyed it much. ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Deep, my friend: and indeed life is 'moving on' - just ask the fox and the owl, the mouse and the mole and the shrew - they who seek that life, and those who run for theirs; and all the others that live and share one side of the ice, or the other. Much enjoyed, and much enjoyed reading you again. j. |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
JuJu...More than just words, so much more. Enough said...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
spring is coming back soon, enjoyed reading yann |
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