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Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2019-01-30 09:37 PM



If you perceive
that there is no message,
no core of understanding
in my poetry,
then you have perceived
my poetry correctly

The words that are
the most beautiful to me,
are words I cannot understand
tucked neatly
within a sentence
that I have no grasp of whatsoever

Like an
abstract painting
that speaks
out to infinity...
without the
slightest utterance...

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2019-01-30 11:06 PM


Whoa, nice mug shot Bluesy!

So, I've been reading you all incorrectly huh? Okay, so you're telling me you lack understanding and message? If you say so ...
Nah, that all went over my head...that I'm scratching trying to get your drift here.
Don't get me wrong, it is a good poem and I like it. I just have this one raised eyebrow I can't seem to get back down ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
2 posted 2019-01-31 12:15 PM


I'm pleased you like the "mug shot", Miss Lori.

Those were very exciting days for us,
but we have no interest in reliving
all aspects of those days. I feel
confident you know just what I mean.  

Oh! The poem! I almost forgot to thank you for reading it,
which of course, I do profusely, my dear,
but as with a few others I've so noted,
this one is "pure, unadulterated fiction".

(Unless, of course, someone out there wants to believe it!)

Thanks again, doll    

  
  


...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
Senior Member
Posts 1066
MI
3 posted 2019-02-02 12:21 PM



I think I have perceived your poetry spot on lol  Your titles always lil' gems within a gem if ya know how to perceive me     Enjoyed

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