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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2019-01-27 03:21 PM



Longing for an awesome from years gone by
leaves the taint of discontent on the status quo.
That impetus that now lies dead in the dirt
of past traumas and drama and all regret,
once fueled a struggling self esteem.
Energy and innocence of youth spent
rolling a boulder of bad choices uphill.
Only to arrive broken, tired and uninspired
to an age where life feels like just another chore
gathering dust as it waits to be done.
The monotony is disrupted in moments,
like memories, fleeting.
Joy is practically painful to the touch.
So tender as to render tears.
Priceless still.
Settling for a bed made
for sleeping dreams
and calling it contentment.

LGR(C)1/27/19

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
1 posted 2019-01-27 03:42 PM


quote:
Joy is practically painful to the touch.
So tender as to render tears.
Priceless still.
Settling for a bed made
for sleeping dreams
and calling it contentment


Hmm… This reads like a watercolor in the rain, Miss Lori.
I could have quoted the entire piece.

Please tell me it’s pure, unadulterated fiction...

It is...right  


...just bein' Bluesy

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2019-01-27 04:43 PM


No, sadly it is not. However, it is a passing cloud. It is not where I live but a place that comes to visit uninvited. Not to worry, clouds never last forever and even when they linger they make for breathtaking sun sets and rises.
~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
3 posted 2019-01-27 10:13 PM


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PGfNsHCND90

Toss this around, Miss Lori...and see if it makes a salad.

...just bein' Bluesy

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