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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2019-01-14 02:34 PM






The place was hoppin' tonight
I sat up front next to the dance floor
Definitely had my boogie shoes on
Ready and waiting to be jazzed

The sax player was a real looker
I could not help but notice him
He sure knew how to make that
Sax yakkity yak and then some

He had a groove in his move
His deft fingers slid smoothly
It was those saxy lips that got me
He sure knew how to use them

Every note seeped into my soul
The rhythmic beat devoured me
My body melded into the melody
I was immersed within his reedy trill

Before I knew it he was off the stage
Standing before me with a twinkle in his eyes
Seductively serenading me as I danced
My body fused with each drawn out note

Yeah
Baby
Sax
Me
Up

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Bluesy Socrateaser
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1 posted 2019-01-14 03:12 PM


"Sax", eh?
You wrote this like you know something about it, Miss Pinky  

Yep, right from the dampened "reedy trill".
Yes, my dear, I'm a big fan of sax playing myself. It cries the blues better than a bent E string...

Top to bottom, your poetry strikes a smooth, yet powerful chord...I felt like I could see and hear it all.     


...just bein' Bluesy

2islander2
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2 posted 2019-01-14 09:43 PM


hello pip, you had a very pleasant experience, i like sax and your poem both, exquisite time


yann

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3 posted 2019-01-15 06:00 PM


Alana, Alana, Alana - Just when I was in the mood for some exquisite eruptive emotionality, you came along and saxed me up with this wonderful poetic injection. Hey, you know what? I'm feeling pinklish better already and will be back in two weeks for booster shots. Now that's music to the ears. Hallelujah! Much enjoyed. Namyh
Poet In Pink
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4 posted 2019-01-15 06:18 PM


Thankies Bluesy for dropping in to read ~ Love the sax it's one of my favs
Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2019-01-15 06:19 PM


Hello Yann ~ Nice to hear from you. Happy to hear you enjoyed ~ Hope all is well with you
Alana

Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2019-01-15 06:24 PM


Thanks for the read and nice comment Namyh ~ Glad you enjoyed...Booster shot!  You're a riot!     
augustsky
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7 posted 2019-01-15 09:02 PM


Woo..Hooo..Cool, Sexy, & Romantic all rolled into one. I like this vibe too.

Way to go Alana

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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8 posted 2019-01-16 03:50 AM


Pinkcoolcat!
I love the sax! I love this! You took me there and how! Yes ma'am you did! ~L

Bluesy Socrateaser
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9 posted 2019-01-19 12:29 PM


Hey there, Miss Pinky!

I was listening to some Candy Dulfer tonight and thought you might like to hear a coupla' numbers of hers.

This one's titled, "No End".

You'll find it here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0s5x-9nlC_E

...and this one, of course, is titled, "Wish You Were Here":

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6QXG-9CjYeQ

(This one leads me to the most provocative of interpretations   )  

See ya!     


...just bein' Bluesy

Poet In Pink
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10 posted 2019-01-25 01:08 PM


Thankies Sky ~ Glad you enjoyed
Huggerz

Poet In Pink
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11 posted 2019-01-25 01:14 PM


Thanks Lori Lou   Always appreciate you taking time to read
Poet In Pink
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12 posted 2019-01-25 01:15 PM


Thanks for the share Bluesy  
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