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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2017-03-30 05:47 PM




Wowie Zowie


Went back to Thailand
the other day
to visit an old friend
I met along the way;
she told me if I visited her
she would treat me like a king,
I told her I would treat her like a queen,
I missed her smile
it was all over my dreams;
so as I boarded the plane
I thought of her smile many times
and when I arrived she was waiting at the airlines,
to see her standing there was a sight to see
and the world went kaboom
as she sweetly hugged me.


JamesLee
3/30/17


  


  


  

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BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
1 posted 2017-03-30 06:44 PM


Sweet poem, your title says it all.
P.U Stinkenbaum
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Posts 388
No Fan Of Exhaust Fans
2 posted 2017-03-30 09:28 PM


This needs to continue James. That's too big of a trip for such a brief writing. Recollections of Thailand (Ubon & Bangkok) are few now, but volumes could have been written had I not been spending my baht on the 'finer' things!

Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here...

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2017-04-10 10:03 PM


Thank you Blues Serenade and Stinkenbaum for reading and commenting...james
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2018-10-18 05:42 PM


"Wowie Zowie!"

No better comment could I make, my friendd!

j.

2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
5 posted 2018-10-25 08:30 PM


so nice james, i feel some tears here


yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
6 posted 2018-10-26 01:48 PM


Very good, James. Nothing like a smile on a woman's face,

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

effjayel
Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity
7 posted 2018-11-03 09:00 AM


I can almost taste the anticipation Jame's,good write my friend

"Ignorance is the Enemy...."

JL
Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128
Texas, USA
8 posted 2018-11-04 06:53 PM


This is so, JamesMichael
Great write, my friend.

JL


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