Open Poetry #50 |
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Wowie Zowie |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Wowie Zowie Went back to Thailand the other day to visit an old friend I met along the way; she told me if I visited her she would treat me like a king, I told her I would treat her like a queen, I missed her smile it was all over my dreams; so as I boarded the plane I thought of her smile many times and when I arrived she was waiting at the airlines, to see her standing there was a sight to see and the world went kaboom as she sweetly hugged me. JamesLee 3/30/17 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Sweet poem, your title says it all. |
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P.U Stinkenbaum Member Posts 388 No Fan Of Exhaust Fans |
This needs to continue James. That's too big of a trip for such a brief writing. Recollections of Thailand (Ubon & Bangkok) are few now, but volumes could have been written had I not been spending my baht on the 'finer' things! Pass the Glade if you're going to do that here... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Blues Serenade and Stinkenbaum for reading and commenting...james |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Wowie Zowie!" No better comment could I make, my friendd! j. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
so nice james, i feel some tears here yann |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Very good, James. Nothing like a smile on a woman's face, ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
I can almost taste the anticipation Jame's,good write my friend "Ignorance is the Enemy...." |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
This is so, JamesMichael Great write, my friend. JL ![]() |
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