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Open Poetry #50
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kevinjtaylor
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Posts 61
British Columbia, Canada
0 posted 2019-01-04 10:25 AM

I don't want to write
what you want to read

I want you to hear
what I want you to say

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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2019-01-04 11:11 AM

. . . "what I want you to say"

Need to clarify the above line - - - sounds almost Jim Jonesish.

j.
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
2 posted 2019-01-04 11:12 AM

Oops!  Double posted this (moderator, please delete this one)


Thanks,


jimmy
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
3 posted 2019-01-04 02:12 PM

If I may be so presumptuous Kevin, I figured you meant it to go this way:

"I want you to hear
what I want to say"

If not, then I beg your pardon.

...just bein' Bluesy
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