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Diving Swan
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Diving Swan |
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soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Diving Swan Which the star ridden sky which the calm skin of water poke a hole through the night and see the diving swan so serene How far the day's shore side how close the teeth of winter upstairs in this upside down dream the diving swan so serene We fall as we rise the tears clear our eyes and this cold stillness in our bones will linger when we awake alone a wash of white is the only view fine feathers of the swan precious and few learn not to run learn not to hide we must all come undone we must all close our eyes Who do these stars shine for who drinks in this water why the hole in the night to see the diving swan so serene Where the day’s distant shore is bitten by the winter fall downstairs in this side up dream the diving swan so serene Still the diving swan is so so oh so serene “All is fair in love and songwriting” - Norah Jones |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Wooohooo...kind of like a cleansing of the mind...you brought the moonlight to life as only you can do. Makes a girl feel all dreamy and dewy. Love the soft shimmer soul drifter. |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Souls, 'poke a hole through the night'..just one line among many I love. Wonderful visions you've created. Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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