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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
if the landscape bothers you, don't make a fuss, let it breath again like a church, Under the great lightness of the mountains, Don't blame birds and lemontrees, Don't blame the fox looking at the moon, See, quietness is more precious than gold, a poem can teach you that, it bites me if landscape bothers you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
the quietude of grace...very nicely done and felt |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Lee J, loved your comment, yann |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Yann, "quietness is more precious than gold, a poem can teach you that"...Love that line Poet, how true that is. Enjoyed, Sky~ ~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Sky, this is what american people call a "punchline" i can copy that, it enhances the poem, thanks for commenting yann |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yann, your writing intrigues me. Something about the language differences comes through in you perspective that strikes me as profound. I like the way you see things. ~L |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wish I had said what LeeJ did; her comment so perfect. Enjoyed my friend, as ususal . . . j. |
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