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ptime
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0 posted 2018-11-15 06:19 PM



introduction to chess via poetry carlsen v caruana 15.11.18
this is not a confession
surrounded the castle with no delay
not slightly odd with depression
no brainiacs as still learning to play.
history was on board
taking place lots of force
claps and cheers did applaud
all eager to appreciate getting on high horse.
media were swarming
pappa was pointing and to table drawn
not just on russia are thoughts forming
carlsen into the paper put pawn.
the side rooms were no lack
talk is a pure delight
world coverage not black
a bit of misogyny a silly lie white.
love the rituals
all went down sweet
eat sleep live and play well were good calls
poetry lovers i hope you enjoy my chess greet.

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-11-17 06:28 AM


P,
Don't be discouraged you aren't getting comments. I think your work is creative and well done. Personally, I find your topics go over my head. That says nothing bad about you!
Keep writing and submitting. ~L

JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2019-01-14 10:18 PM


This is typical of you, Lori, making a poet  feel welcome. I seem to remember your words to me as I was struggling.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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