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Open Poetry #50

Livein' tha Life

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

0 posted 2018-10-19 09:38 PM

see
me first
or I see you
it doesn't matter
not really, you know
life keeps on ticking down
eventually you are under ground
take time to check things out
live a little it is not hard
jump from airplane
spit in the wind
love you
bye

©October 5, 2009 Jerry Pat Bolton

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

1 posted 2018-10-20 12:02 PM

LOL - got it right man! Took some effort to get it lined up so perfectly, and make it sound good too!

Well done!!

j.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

2 posted 2018-10-22 02:24 PM

amazing

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2018-10-25 01:22 PM

Many thanks, Jimmy, I appreciate every word of yout comment.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

4 posted 2018-10-25 01:23 PM

One word can carry many meanings, Lee, and yours carry them all. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

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