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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2018-10-11 07:45 PM



J’ai attendu, j’ai attendu,
Tout nu dans la neige,
Bleu comme un bison du Wyoming,
j’ai attendu un signe, un mot, une lettre,
Je pensais à elle tous les jours,
comme un bison du Wyoming,
Et la neige me recouvrait,
mon sang avait peur de tout,
Comme un bison du Wyoming,
J’ai attendu, j’ai attendu, le temps lui n’attendait personne,
Il m’a tiré dessus  comme un bison du Wyoming,
Maintenant je suis mort, étendu fans la neige,
Comme un bison du Wyoming, tu n’es jamais venue.  
La neige tombe, je suis perdu, son silence
est moindre que le tien, je suis perdu,
La neige tombe sur ma tombe, J’attends encore.

I've waited so long, so long,
alone and naked in the snow,
Blue like a Wyoming Bison,
I've waited a sign, a word, a letter,
I was thinking of her, every long second,
Like a bison in the snow of Wyoming,
Ans the snow wad covering me up,
My Blood was cold and scared,
Like a bison of Wyoming,
I have waited so long, so long,
and realized that time waits none,
TIMES shot on me, like a bison of Wyoming,
now i am still dead, lying in deep snow,
LIKE a bison of Wyoming, you never came,
Snow is overall, I am lost ,its silence is
lighter than yours, U am lost,
Snow is all over my tombstone, I am still waiting….  

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-10-13 07:28 AM


Really like this one a lot! You have described cold and alone well with Wyoming. The bison was a great idea too. Well done. ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-11-19 02:14 PM


This brought back a multitude of memories. I spent two years up there in Wyoming. Some great memories I'm telling you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
3 posted 2018-11-20 02:52 AM


This felt a little sad to me..& a bit haunting, stayed with me after reading.

Well done Poet

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

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