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jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas

0 posted 2018-10-04 11:30 PM



In The Folds Of Ecstasy


I play
with water and air,
sunshine at my back,
fingers just touching
the surface tension enough
to hide the splashing
of my tears
kissing the sky’s
reflection in the pool
where birds love
to bathe.

I miss your eyes
looking at me,
from there.
Your smile
kissing me,
from there.

And Oh, your Love
like the wind
from the sea
touching me
everywhere.

Enveloping my soul,
like God’s own love,
in the folds
of ecstasy.
.

wesley james beard, jr.




© Copyright 2018 Wesley James Beard, Jr. - All Rights Reserved
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2018-10-05 12:02 PM


just wonderful, a great communion in your words, loved everything  here
yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-10-06 12:28 PM


Quite a compiling work my friend, and the ending was absolutely compiling. Thank you.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2018-10-07 06:33 AM


You are a blessed man Jimmy that you can write so exquisitely about love. Your scenarios may vary but the emotion always rings true in a visceral way. I always walk away from one of your poems thinking "he has had to have experienced a deep and lasting love himself to be able to write this". ~L
Paul Wilson
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4 posted 2018-10-20 02:30 PM


Jimmy... Very tender touching write. Enjoyed very much my friend...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

5 posted 2018-10-22 02:23 PM


this is extremely beautiful and touching....I could feel your ache....lovely

augustsky
Senior Member
Posts 828
midwest US
6 posted 2018-11-09 09:39 PM


Jwesley, This breeze of beauty..just blew me away..

Lovely piece Poet..

Sky~

~Don't Quit Your Day Dream~

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
7 posted 2018-11-18 03:19 AM


A touching beauty, Jimmy.

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