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2islander2
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by the sea

0 posted 2018-10-02 09:36 AM


Cette ville me plait. D’elle émane une sincérité.
Sa baie est un écrin. La mer veille sur elle.
Elle a quelque chose d’unique. Comme une rose.

This town entices me.. I feel deep sincerity here.
Her bay is a clueless case.
The ocean is caring..She is special and unique
like a rose.

[This message has been edited by 2islander2 (10-04-2018 11:52 PM).]

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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
1 posted 2018-10-03 10:02 PM


I have been to San Francisco many times . . . It is a city for the young at heart . . . I loved it there. Very much

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

2islander2
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2 posted 2018-10-04 03:44 PM


thanks Jerry, what you write is so precious

yann

soul drifter
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since 2004-09-08
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Colorado
3 posted 2018-10-04 05:45 PM


San Francisco. She is indeed special and unique like a rose. Denver is my beloved hometown but SF is the greatest city I've ever been to. Well written tribute to her.
jwesley
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Spring, Texas
4 posted 2018-10-04 11:20 PM


Beautiful piece, my friend.  Did you mean unique vs unic?

Was in 'frisco a number of times myself, especially while in the Navy - had so hot times, especially in the Chinatown bars . . . lol.

j.

jwesley
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5 posted 2018-10-04 11:20 PM


Beautiful piece, my friend.  Did you mean unique vs unic?

Was in 'frisco a number of times myself, especially while in the Navy - had so hot times, especially in the Chinatown bars . . . lol.

j.

jwesley
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Spring, Texas
6 posted 2018-10-04 11:21 PM


oops - somehow double posted....triple now!!!
2islander2
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7 posted 2018-10-04 11:55 PM


thanks soul drifter, we are so unanimous about , it means something great and true,
yann

2islander2
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8 posted 2018-10-04 11:58 PM


thanks jwesley, i didn't visit chinatowns bars, it must have been awesome and hot, thanks for the post
yann

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