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Open Poetry #50
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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
0 posted 2018-08-30 04:47 AM


Rough edges
that refuse to smooth,
rub deep creases
of callous,
cutting deep
through the years.
Chronic friction creating
layer after layer
of toughened skin
dead to the touch.
Never ignore a blister
on your heart.

LGR(C)8/30/18
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2islander2
Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
1 posted 2018-08-30 09:27 PM

what a splendid metaphor lori, and lessons to extract of these délicieux and precious poem,  I really loves this beautiful poem,


yann
Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2018-08-31 04:53 AM

Thanks Yann,
Bless your heart
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