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Poet In Pink
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0 posted 2018-08-15 07:27 PM






S unshine bathes my soul in the joy of a new day
U nder the pear tree squirrels play tug of war
M arigolds sway softly shaking off the dew of morn
M erry little sparrows splish splash in the fountain
E verything in nature is alive and vibrant
R attling cicadas sing out a melodious song

D etermined to spread the news of impending weather
A soft breeze stirs the trees and my senses , I
Y earn for more tranquil times as this, but
S ummer is waning quickly so each day I cherish

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2islander2
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1 posted 2018-08-15 07:39 PM


exquisite and sensitive, loved it and the summer images are "thrilling" ??? thanks  a lot


yann

jwesley
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2 posted 2018-08-15 11:00 PM


Not only love the poem, but the picture is awesome!  Is it your photo?

j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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3 posted 2018-08-17 11:23 AM


Ahhh. . . Yes! Beautiful Summer days. You have brought them to our attention with your rich words. They, (your words) are beautiful also.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2018-08-19 05:53 AM


Pinkshinything,

Well if that wasn't a breath of fresh air!
I could smell the flowers and see the butterflies! You weave a smile between your lines!  ~L

Poet In Pink
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5 posted 2018-08-23 10:24 PM


Thank you Yann for your kind words Alana
Poet In Pink
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6 posted 2018-08-23 10:27 PM


Thanks for dropping by J. So glad to hear you enjoyed. No the pic isn't my yard ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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7 posted 2018-08-23 10:29 PM


Thank you for your kind comments Jerry Appreciate you taking the time to read ~ Alana
Poet In Pink
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8 posted 2018-08-23 10:30 PM


Glad you enjoyed Lori Lou ~ Always nice to share a smile with you   Huggerz ~ Pinkshinything lol
LeeJ
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9 posted 2018-08-24 02:16 PM


What beautiful colors, very nicely done....
love the words, and enjoyed reading, a happy poem.
always sad when summer leaves.

Poet In Pink
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10 posted 2018-08-25 09:57 PM



Thank you for reading and for your lovely comments LeeJ   Appreciate you ~ Alana

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