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Open Poetry #50

arrivee

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2018-06-19 09:24 PM

A kind very blue cargo boat arrives
With on board Yves and Matthew,
They are going to land both In Brest
and to visit happy coffees,
to Inhale other oily flavors
That the diesel oil
or the imperious trade winds.

Inspired-8
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since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

1 posted 2018-07-15 07:12 PM

A bit abstract leaves more for the reader to ponder which is the way I love to write.

Inspired-8

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

2 posted 2018-07-16 10:01 AM

thanks inspired, nice to read intelligent comment and appreciation,

yann

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2018-07-16 12:52 PM

I loved this line . . .

"or the imperious trade winds"

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Poet In Pink
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Posts 1066
MI

4 posted 2018-07-17 03:33 PM

So happy to of arrived into yet another journey through your words Yann Always enjoy the images and sensory offerings in your writing. Thank you for sharing ~ Alana

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

Posts 6825
by the sea

5 posted 2018-07-17 05:15 PM

thanks Jerry

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

6 posted 2018-07-17 05:17 PM

thanks a lot alana, i loved reading your comment

yann

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