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tatalinia
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since 2005-12-17
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0 posted 2018-06-16 03:20 AM


Baby, did your mommy leave you?
In the dark side of the alley
Baby did your mommy leave you?
In the dark side of the alley?

Speak to me child
Speak to me now!
Speak to me baby

I was there, I was there!
I felt everything because I was that
She just left me to fend off all the predators

That is what the baby told me
Knife in hand she could barely understand
That is what a baby told me
A baby  told me
A baby told me

Dark side of me
The dark side of me
The dark side of me
In memorie
While young, that was the dark side of me

Running in life,
The dark side of me
The dark side of me
The dark side of me

No fear, no fear now

I do not need shine or wealth, just a pen and some paper for my health

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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
1 posted 2018-06-16 07:46 PM


this is beautiful, and we have to tame that too, even sometimes to Recognize that side, the poem touched me

  yann

Paul Wilson
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2 posted 2018-06-18 09:08 PM


T...Really liked the emotion you put in this poem. Keep writing your feelings, it suits you well...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

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