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Lost and Gone
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Lost and Gone |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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standing there in the full moonlight his eyes pierced the sky far-away he saw a most tender heart broken within what has been lost can n’er have again yea! his lasting years go to her to hold and kiss he should leave this earth searching for peace on the other side ©November 3, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
You keep growing in so many ways. Here your hope is thriving. Good write! ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
And you are one of the best when it comes to commenting . . . Enjoying your vacation? Whittling down your todo list? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-30-2018 12:55 PM).] |
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augustsky Senior Member Posts 828 midwest US |
Miss Poet Jerry Pat.. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
Wonderfully written conveys a real sense of yearning. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Glad to see you back, Jerry. |
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