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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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0 posted 2018-05-29 02:38 PM



standing there
in the full moonlight
his eyes pierced the sky
far-away he saw
a most tender heart
broken within
what has been lost
can n’er have again
yea!
his lasting years
go to her
to hold and kiss
he should leave this earth
searching for peace
on the other side

©November 3, 2017 / Jerry Pat Bolton

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

© Copyright 2018 Jerry Pat Bolton - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2018-05-29 04:21 PM


You keep growing in so many ways. Here your hope is thriving. Good write! ~L
JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-05-29 06:32 PM


And you are one of the best when it comes to commenting . . . Enjoying your vacation? Whittling down your todo list?

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

[This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (05-30-2018 12:55 PM).]

augustsky
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3 posted 2020-07-07 09:39 PM


Miss Poet Jerry Pat..
Marshalzu
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4 posted 2020-07-08 03:58 AM


Wonderfully written conveys a real sense of yearning.
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2020-07-10 05:20 PM


Glad to see you back, Jerry.

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