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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
The indifference creates other rivers, Sensitive rivers, We cross them alone, indifferent, We meet Indians, bivouacs, We make of the traffic of alcohol, with weak spirits, To transport barrels, We hunt bisons in our past dreams, Point. The ramblings return us to the grass. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nothing like having a pleasant daydream is there, Yann? ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (03-03-2017 11:14 PM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
not only jerry, it is more deep than that , thanks for reading yann |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
I like the last line.."point..." , and I feel there's something deep in what you want to say..keeps my mind thinking not only dreaming |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Indifference. It causes civilizations to fall. That and its partner, complacency. Alison |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks jjote for the precious accurate comment, it sounds perfect to me yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
this is so true Alison, the two which you named made u s feeling apart, indifference and complaisance, loved your rich comment yann |
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