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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-05-03 01:06 PM


Have you ever wondered who you really are?
Precious, inner thinking does articulate emotions,
...but they're only words after all
At times they seem so powerful, so invulnerable,
that they make a small person feel tall

Then there’s those luscious plaintiffs masquerading
in their fine, silken, pinstriped leotards
Some with venom, others well mannered
All different manifestations
of yourself in different kinds of situations

Have you ever wondered who you really are?
All this concentration, perhaps too much interpretation
about your station in the making,
Who really cares if it's rising or falling?
Such gradations in rank can lead a person to feeling poorly


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-05-03 02:20 PM


I think I thunked too much and got a kink in my thinker. That poem sure asks a lot of a person. Builds character I suppose. ~L
Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
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In The Mirror
2 posted 2018-05-03 04:53 PM


It was a very good year.

...just bein' Bluesy

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