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Night Rain
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Night Rain |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Everything looks shellacked as the moonlight cast upon the wetness. Like a mother’s hum to her child, the rain murmured to the soil. The soil so needy it soaked up the water as fast as it fell. The raindrops fell so quietly, no slumber was disrupted. There were no flashes of light nor rumblings of thunder to accompany the soft shower. It fell acapella. LGR(C)4/25/18 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Excellent writing, Lori, I especially was taken with this line . . . "Like a mother’s hum to her child," ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
There was a good soaking rain that fell like that a few nights ago...and it too was quiet. "It fell acapella", was a great way to describe it, Miss Lori.  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Jerry that is one of my favorites too. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Bluesy that was my other favorite line. Glad you liked it. ~L |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bluesy, I had a typo in the first line. Did you catch that? and not tell me? no bueno. I've fixed it now. Everything is cool.  |
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