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Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-13 10:51 PM


Remembering times before we grew old
Having fun with you...making a pass
Walking at sunset on a winding dirt road
Laying in the hilly high grass...

Skies a million shades of blue
Hiking around for hours
Frolicking with frogs and butterflies
Stopping to pick wildflowers

Hills the size of mountains
Oceans of pine tree green.
Many kinds of things and places
Like we’d never seen

These things and more I do remember,
These things and more I’ve never forgot
Midnight talks and all our music
Life was simple connecting the dots...

...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2018-04-14 05:38 AM


What a wonderful foundation to your relationship. Soon you will simply be moving into a different form of together. I don't think you have ever really been apart since you met. (at least from the sounds of it).
You have a love to be envied. ~L

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
2 posted 2018-04-14 09:29 AM


Connecting those dots was meaningful and heavenly. To reconnect the same dots, amd adding even more is a daunting task, but I have a feeling you will be up to it.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417
In The Mirror
3 posted 2018-04-14 12:51 PM


Thank you so much, Miss Lori

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror
4 posted 2018-04-14 12:53 PM


Thanks for your reply, Jerry. It's appreciated.

...just bein' Bluesy

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