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At Sundown
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At Sundown |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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My front to the sun. My back casts a shadow. My shadow is long. Just temporary. Just the old shadow and me. Just remembering. Each day ticks away Each tock makes the shadow grow. Each night fades to black. LGR(C)4\12\18 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"Fade to black," the oft remarked and temporary rest from the days thoughts and remembrances. Until, of course, until daybreak when the call is to go forth with the sun at your back. ~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks for the read and commentary Jerry, I appreciate it. ~L |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
Glowing in the dark Shadows illuminate her Passing on in peace ...just bein' Bluesy |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Bluesy that is so sweet thank you very much. ~L  |
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Bluesy Socrateaser Member Elite
since 2002-11-07
Posts 2417In The Mirror |
...welcome, Miss Lori.  ...just bein' Bluesy |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
subtle feeling, like as life goes on, shadows grow , delightful yann |
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