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Bluesy Socrateaser
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In The Mirror

0 posted 2018-04-10 02:13 AM


I can see the whole of heaven,
the match light of every star
An evening made complete
in the chords of her guitar

..."Soon", Baby


...just bein' Bluesy

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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1 posted 2018-04-10 05:22 AM


This made me smile Bluesy, but then you always do when you talk about your Linny love. I can't wait for the happily ever after. ~L
JerryPat2
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2 posted 2018-04-10 08:38 AM


These four lines touched me unto my dept, the fifth line grabbed my heart.

~ If they give you ruled paper, write sideways. ~

Bluesy Socrateaser
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3 posted 2018-04-10 12:47 PM


I like to set you smiling, Miss Lori.

Many thanks!

...just bein' Bluesy

Bluesy Socrateaser
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4 posted 2018-04-10 12:48 PM


You compliment me, Jerry and I thank you for that. I appreciate your reading.

...just bein' Bluesy

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